** A Twilight Song *** Poem by ANJALI SINHA

** A Twilight Song ***

Rating: 3.7


A song of the evening
Wow! ! ! ! ! I behold the scene
In that city of love
In XTS I devour
All the verses
poured out
on scraps of petals
never say thou
at sunset the gathering
with goblet in hand
waiting at taverns
like a pilgrim forlorn
with tearful eyes
that I have forgotten
thy love filled eyes.

Under that banyan tree-
yes under that banyan tree
the skies so clear
a promise we made
holding hands
thus love we proclaimed
the world did see
Recession or no recession
In verses we poured
The angels sang with us
The seraphs retired on high
The stars broke out
In ethereal blues
And myriad hues

How can’st one say
First make the sun
in private shine
And bid the moon
to wane in crescents divine
So that he may
his beams confine
In answer to thine sublime
That after
the floodlight of morn azure
And fullfilment of desires
We face not each other.

Know ye once again
And see my face
Need not be illusions
Make them real
Whirl up thy head
And screw up thy heart
And make this
A TWILIGHT SONG
A SONG OF THE EVENING
Forever to last.

Anjali

03-03-2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saugata Majumder 28 April 2010

Very easy going and smooth reading. Good word selection. Nice work.

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Anand Madhukar 18 September 2009

A lovely read, beautifully worded and with rich imagery.

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Ritty Patnaik 21 July 2009

anjali...it is a beautiful poem of a longing tender heart.very good write.

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Saadat Tahir 03 July 2009

nostalgia served on an ample banyan leaf....like the ceremonies of olden subcontinent and days long gone past very sweet and tender...awesome infact cheers an ten

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Sanjib Das 16 June 2009

Anju, while reading the poem, I can recollect those bygone days which took wing a long ago.Your poem remembers me those incidents, those dear faces which are only in my memory.

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Shahzia Batool 08 April 2013

This universality of your creativity is forever to last...

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Ken E Hall 28 June 2012

This poem forever to last will for sure as will all your poems and sweet songs a bubbling ++++10...regards

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A sweet song bursting with beauty! Well done my friend! 10/10

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 June 2010

A very pleasant reading. it provides. your fine feelings and promises and songs. lovely creation from your poetic mind. thank you very much..

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Lynn Glover 27 June 2010

Beautifully written love poem in which you pulled me into the poem and I became part of it. That is what a good poetess does. Very good. Lynn

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