Wednesday, March 26, 2008

A Vale Of Rune Comments

Rating: 5.0

Gentle fleck runs through the novel of the night
Desert yet burns desolate by the exile
Breath passes through the void
silence seems voiceless by the verse
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Dr subhendu kar
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Malini Kadir 06 April 2008

your poems are a joy to read for poetry lovers..............mute transmute

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Emancipation Planz 05 April 2008

With this poem I can unveil each line to embrace natural and physical characters that are settings placed down for so many... keep writing them Subham, One Peace at a time

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Seema Chowdhury 27 March 2008

Another lovely poem, i enjoyed reading. you have chosen excellent words to express the quiteness of the muteness zone. thanks for sharing.

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Abha Sharma 27 March 2008

Earth quivers by the quake milling around the parole of relict redeems by the rain of muse impeccable language....and the imagery has made the words resound...liked reading it.

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Thad Wilk 26 March 2008

Nice write Dr.Kar! The Vale of Rune with its six magical charms can forsee! *10*! ! Great read! Friend Thad

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Michael Pruchnicki 26 March 2008

I dwelt once in a vale of ruin by a stream that ran down to a sea of dark regret where leprechauns swam unmolested by mermaids

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