Deluke Muwanigwa

A Walk In The Park

A walk in the park
Is not a walk in the dark
The dark is the dark
Things happen in the dark
The same things can happen in a park
The park could be dark
A WALK IN THE PARK DEPENDS
The park could be dark
The same things can happen in a park
Things happen in the dark
The dark is the dark
Is not a walk in the dark
A walk in the park

Topic(s) of this poem: poetic expression

Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 21, 2020

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  • Varsha MVarsha M (11/21/2020 11:34:00 PM)

    Dark and park are not same. Things in dark can go wrong. A park can be in dark but dark can never become park which is beautiful.

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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (11/21/2020 11:26:00 PM)

    Dark is dark
    if a path goes thru it
    then there found some footprints - o it's walk
    and the lights there start to enlighten
    after frequent walking

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  • Terry CraddockTerry Craddock (11/21/2020 11:05:00 PM)

    P2

    a walk in the park can be a walk in the dark
    but it will not be like a walk in the daytime
    a walk in the park can be a walk in the dark
    but it will not be a walk in the same park as the daytime
    a walk in the park can be a walk in the dark
    but it will not be as friendly crowded or safe as daytime

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  • Terry CraddockTerry Craddock (11/21/2020 11:04:00 PM)

    P1 A Dark Nighttime Park Is Not The Same As A Daytime Park

    a walk in the park can be a sunrise walk at dawn
    but not if we get up late arrive after the dawn
    a walk in the park can be an early morning stroll
    but it is not an early morning run up with the sun
    a walk in the park can be a midday walk in the sun
    but not if it is cloudy or raining or not a midday walk
    a walk in the park can be a sunset walk at days end
    but not if we are too early or to late for the sunset

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