A Wayward Journey Poem by Neelam Dadhwal

A Wayward Journey

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The path is laid and sometimes with turn
I moved too with intent of a bloom
I shuffled the earth below my feet
because I could hear the murmur of breeze
singing to me the song of dawn, of new light
how beauty is possible, goodness is
sometimes I felt I am too queer
nevertheless bounded by rhythm of universe
I never stopped, never asked
why it is pink of horizon or blue
it doesn't mattered, it mattered to me
it is there where I often went and came never hollowed
I wanted this beauty to long last
till the earth is rotating and we in her bosom danced.

Friday, May 25, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: nature,pink,sometimes
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 24 July 2018

Well thought out and nicely crafted in persuasive expressions with artistic brilliance. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing Neelam.

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 May 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Neelam. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Neelam Dadhwal 26 May 2018

Thanks for reading my poem and liking it. Will surely read yours.

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Dr Antony Theodore 25 May 2018

singing to me the song of dawn, of new light how beauty is possible, goodness is...rhythm of the universe, horizon, blue, lasting beauty.. such a fine poem. so many thoughts, poetic.. tony

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Neelam Dadhwal 26 May 2018

It is my delight to share with you this poem. Thanks for appreciation.

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Neelam Dadhwal 26 May 2018

Thanks. It is delight to share my work with you.

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