A Weed......Honesty Poem by ritty patnaik

A Weed......Honesty



a weed amongst weeds
honesty, to you i do plead
show yourself to me,
one more time,
in your pristine beauty
of bright translucent white
a adorable name,
for a weed so hidden
amongst natures
wooden bristle beauty.

Friday, December 25, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,honesty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ejaz Khan 30 December 2009

To see beauty and blessings inherent in weeds is innovative, very meaningful write, ritty!

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Raj Nandy 26 December 2009

A thought provoking poem! A weed does retain its pristine beauty, - and beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder! Honesty is practised in this material world as the best policy! An honest man is one-eyed in the kingdom of the blind! Only a poet's eye can spot a flower in the poppy blossom! For the world at large poppy is just a narcotic - bringing great wealth in the black market of drugs! Your short poem has provoked these thoughts! Thanks Ritty! 10! -Raj

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Milica Franchi De Luri 25 December 2009

lovely poem ritty............

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