ritty patnaik

Rookie - 41 Points (6th july 1952 / cuttack)

A Weed......Honesty - Poem by ritty patnaik

a weed amongst weeds
honesty, to you i do plead
show yourself to me,
one more time,
in your pristine beauty
of bright translucent white
a adorable name,
for a weed so hidden
amongst natures
wooden bristle beauty.


Comments about A Weed......Honesty by ritty patnaik

  • (12/30/2009 5:56:00 AM)


    To see beauty and blessings inherent in weeds is innovative, very meaningful write, ritty! (Report) Reply

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  • (12/26/2009 1:01:00 AM)


    A thought provoking poem!
    A weed does retain its pristine beauty, - and beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder! Honesty is practised in this material world as the best policy! An honest man is one-eyed in the kingdom of the blind! Only a poet's eye can
    spot a flower in the poppy blossom! For the world at large poppy is just a narcotic
    - bringing great wealth in the black market of drugs! Your short poem has provoked these thoughts! Thanks Ritty! 10! -Raj
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  • (12/25/2009 3:21:00 PM)


    lovely poem ritty............ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 25, 2009



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