A Whisper Of A Hush Motif Poem by nimal dunuhinga

A Whisper Of A Hush Motif

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A vagrant scribbbler just completed few lines.
A piece of creative writing and it's expressing
his inner feelings.
The narrator of the poem is a feminine gender
who made a protest quietly
and the poet was shocked simultaneously.
He sees the little woman a featherweight
who stimulates on the lines
and he heard of her whispering.
'Hey! my dear stick-in-the-mud
why you forced me to involve
with this baronet sexless?
Still the idiot expect a virgin baroness.
How could I be a virgin
after sleeping the half of my precious life
with a notorious poet?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 04 July 2006

An amazing poem in which what is not said resounds louder than what is being said. Very interesting, Nimal. Warm regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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