A Will Willfully Left Poem by Tyler Smith

A Will Willfully Left



As I walked the walk down the road to Townville,
My mare horse plodding beside me,
I could only think of her,
My Ann Anna Annabelle,
The Glorious Glory of the Galaxy.

I stopped by the river to drink a drink,
When, replacing my imaginary image,
A war-loving warrior princess came
And stole me away from this place
Into the watery water.

All of a sudden, suddenly,
Before me, in front of my eyes,
A palatial palace
Glimmered brightly in the sunny sun.
Forward I was thrust thrustingly,
Into the chamber of the chamber of the
Chamber of the king.

The kingly king sat seated upon his throne,
A scepter of a scepter in his hand.
'You shall die a death! ' he yelled at me.
I was soon beheaded with a beheader,
Decapitated from my capitate,
And now I, a ghostly ghost,
Have come back from the dead
To inform you with this information:
'Live lively, love lovingly, and search searchingly.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Megan Collins 15 April 2009

I cracked a smile, and then giggled a little. I like the style here, mostly the repetition, its fun!

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Paige Nielsen 14 April 2009

oh, Tyler, you crack me up as if I were Humpty Dumpty! ! ! Your (amusing) repetition really does lend a steady rhythm/flow here, which is excellent. It is a bit awkward in places, but since it lends to the humour, it works out all right. This poem, to me, is like the crack-baby of Aesop and Mother Goose with a dash of Lewis Carroll thrown in, and that is verrrrrrrry impressive! ! Do I espy a kingly king of poetry? ? Here's hoping!

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SAM Mitsuki 13 April 2009

I really like it. The repitition is great and it ties the poem together well (at least I think it does) .

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Jordan Crider 13 April 2009

dude! i like the repetion, it makes more happy and light! i think this is funny. i like your adjectives!

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Tyler Smith 13 April 2009

Just so you all know, I, the author of this poem, purposefully used, with a purpose, the repetitive repetition to make a quite humorous poem. Really, believe me on this. So don't get confused and say, while scratching your head, 'Is this how he really writes? I don't get this.' This is how the poem is meant to be structured.

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Danielle Martens 27 April 2009

I don't think my brain can stand any more alliteration. You take English way too seriously.

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CoreyLeigh Mason 27 April 2009

...In-ter-est-ing...

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Ashleigh Michaud 23 April 2009

funny stuff. ur good... keep it up love the repitition tho: D

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Gloria Noveron 21 April 2009

i think it sounds funny...a good funny i mean. it's Awesomely Awesome!

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Catina Crum 16 April 2009

Hehehe. I giggled a girly giggle. 'And stole me away from this place Into the watery water. The frigid cold felt like Wet ice cubes.' Here the flow breaks after watery water. Otherwise, I would say that this poem flows fairly nicely due to the repetition of sounds like 'kingly king.' Yup, I like it.

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