A Winter Willow... Sonnet Poem by elysabeth faslund

A Winter Willow... Sonnet

Rating: 5.0


It is time to test the Winter Willows
Rooted on banked edges of Autumn suns
Rivering through September, on their way
Downstream...rapidly tumbling yesterdays

Around boulders into quiet, still coves.
Winter Willows...forever sentinels,
As they were when foliage was Springtime green...
With silent roots, cave deep under this stream...

Supporting, housing, protecting waters
Advancing across the sky. From mornings
Of April, to twilights of November,
Willows journey. Yet, always remember

The Autumn sun, warm, fertilized with years,
Draws young shoots from old roots. Life reappears.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chris Mendros 14 September 2007

beautiful landscape, elegantly worded. I'm jealous.

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Sonny Rainshine 30 October 2007

Perfect form. Haunting theme. Good stuff.

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Blue angel Florida 22 September 2007

A beautiful picture, sweet poem, thanks!

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Melvina Germain 21 September 2007

A truly beautiful sonnet, I love the title, it paints a rather warm picture of winter. --Melvina--

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Robert Howard 18 September 2007

Beautifully done. I love a good nature scene. As refreshing as a walk in woods on an autumn morning.

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Alison Cassidy 15 September 2007

You use words with great skill in this elegant piece describing your bare limbed sentinels and the rhythm of their life beside the water. I loved the weeping willows that shaded the Yarra River of my childhood (since removed by the Council because of problems with their invasive root structure) . We used them as swings and cubby-houses. The light green of their spring growth was unique and incredible. I also remember Andy Pandy and teddy and their willow tree which 'was just like being in a little green house'. Wonderful poem. love, Allie xxxx

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elysabeth faslund

elysabeth faslund

Thibodaux. Louisiana
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