A Working Demand Poem by suzan gumush

A Working Demand

Rating: 3.8


I'm not the buying power for supply or demand
How dare they command
A windfall Of what I've come to earn
Why should I supply
While they multiply
My hard earnt dosh!
So that only they look posh!
I'm drowning can't you see
I'm still walking in three degrees
Multiply my shots
Somehow me they forgot
All they want
Is my living don't you see
Once I'm finished from the workers field....
There you go.....
Now I've forgotton
What comes next!
Because they've already erased
The best of me!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catastrophe King 26 September 2006

This was an interesting piece.. a very bold write. Good read. Deserves the vote.

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Anthony Edmond John 07 August 2008

I love this one Ma'am... Anthony Edmond John... +2348020984990

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Sylvi Sylva 28 January 2008

very very true, Susan...how very dare they! good one and keep it up! loved this poem. ten ten i say

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David Gerardino 06 November 2006

love the first part, , , , , , very good

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Come the revolution sister, it'll all be ok! Ez

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Trinity K 18 October 2006

suzan, how could u let any one erase the best in you....you are super in this one........how dare they command.....yin and yang.......

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