abhimanyu kumar.s

Bronze Star - 2,376 Points (31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

Absurd - Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

So will I live
Like a half lizard
I should live in
With a space of snake.

I must live because
I have come, not
As a man or a being
For all tell to live.

I live not because
I should live
I live only as
One day I have to leave.

Living not for my sake
Just living for I am alive.

Comments about Absurd by abhimanyu kumar.s

  • (6/21/2012 7:34:00 AM)

    Nicely written :) ... Particularly like the last stanza :) ... (Report) Reply

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  • Luvo Mjayezi (11/15/2011 4:32:00 AM)

    Its a lovely poem. I wonder though, it the symbolism of a snake and lizard are used in biblical or rather religious context or o historical? It is a very powerful allegory taht yopu have used and I like it very much and have a poem a little bit similar to yours in terms of the motif or theme of existence (Report) Reply

  • (11/6/2011 10:23:00 AM)

    this is an amazing work of art (Report) Reply

  • (11/4/2011 5:37:00 AM)

    the title is excellent but should have done bit more.8 (Report) Reply

  • (9/9/2011 11:00:00 AM)

    Very beautifully written.......
    Thanks for sharing..
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  • (9/9/2011 11:00:00 AM)

    Very beautifully written.......
    Thanks for sharing..
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  • (9/2/2011 8:46:00 AM)

    well expressed the meaning of life (Report) Reply

  • Eric Mwenda (8/20/2011 10:41:00 AM)

    I see hopelessness, indifference and hidden anger in this poem.livin and doin what u do coz livin is not your choice, but mothernature gave you a small spot that u can't change but accept.it's mind crackin.makes me think of world's imperfection and injustices.i like it (Report) Reply

  • (8/13/2011 2:04:00 PM)

    Absurd, yes!
    'Living not for my sake'?
    The ego finds
    'Just living for Iam alive'
    The soul finds
    Living for just living
    An empty life without aim
    A life finds
    Fear of dying by the minute
    The ego finds
    If only it will seek the soul
    Purpose will encounter
    Its entire life
    Did I solve a riddle here?
    Was that the meaning to your poem?
    My perspective. Your writing touches a critica point to all life in search beyond a material existence.
    Read my poems and enjoy. Rate and comment if you will at your time. Thanks
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  • (8/11/2011 8:20:00 AM)

    i liked this poem, ,
    make me want to see more of your poems
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  • (8/11/2011 4:41:00 AM)

    Hope you are keeping well.
    Love this poem.
    Best wishes

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  • (8/10/2011 3:47:00 PM)

    beautifully written and true! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • (8/8/2011 12:30:00 PM)

    Very beautiful poem!
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 6, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 6, 2011

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