abhimanyu kumar.s
venkatgiri kota

I Was Dead

Rating: 3.8
I had my dinner and
Slept around 10 of night
After a couple hour or so
I found myself dead
Ya, I was dead
My body had become motionless
Eyes shut, hands erect
What about my dreams and aims
All gone, all shattered
Man, I was dead
What next?
Possibly burn, bury and ashes
Suddenly I heard someone shouting
Idiot get up!it's 7 of morning
If you want to know the truth
I was sleeping.
Wednesday, November 23, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
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COMMENTS
Lavanya 14 February 2021
Very expressive, it can suddenly grab attention of people... True feeling...
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Harish 31 January 2020
Super sir
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Well expressed with death and life. Thank you poet.
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Well expressed about death and life, Thank you Poet.
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Adeeb Alfateh 25 June 2019
Possibly burn, bury and ashes Suddenly I heard someone shouting Idiot get up! it's 7 of morning If you want to know the truth I was sleeping. great write 10++++++++++++++++++
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 06 April 2019
BEAUTIFUL IMAGERY HOW INTELLIGENT R YE KNOWING READERS ARE SILLY '' LOL LOVELY AK ' HAVE U EVER READ ME @31 MOMS SMILES MAY BE THNXXXXSSSsssss
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Jagdish Singh Ramána 07 February 2019
wonderful! without aim man is dead and dead is life. a great symbol.
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Megha 04 January 2019
Really it is so nice l just like it
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Pooja 26 October 2018
Loved your poem.. Beautifull expression on life and death. I guess you can publish a poem book.
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Bharati Nayak 03 May 2018
We all are mortals with endless dreams to fulfil.Very often one may wonder what would happen to those unfinished works if he die suddenly ! ! This apprehension may appear like a dream when one is sleeping with such fears in mind..A nice poem, thanks for sharing.
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