abhimanyu kumar.s

Freshman - 749 Points (31.12.1988 / venkatgiri kota)

I Was Dead - Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

I had my dinner and
Slept around 10 of night
After a couple hour or so
I found myself dead
Ya, I was dead
My body had become motionless
Eyes shut, hands erect
What about my dreams and aims
All gone, all shattered
Man, I was dead
What next?
Possibly burn, bury and ashes
Suddenly I heard someone shouting
Idiot get up! it's 7 of morning
If you want to know the truth
I was sleeping.

Comments about I Was Dead by abhimanyu kumar.s

  • Hazel Durham (5/22/2016 4:30:00 AM)

    Original with a great expression that brings the reader into your world with ease, great title! (Report) Reply

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  • Nosheen Irfan (5/20/2016 3:15:00 AM)

    A very interesting poem. Human subconscious can trigger peculiar images. A state of wakefulness reveals the reality. (Report) Reply

  • Jasbir Chatterjee (5/20/2016 3:01:00 AM)

    Quite an interesting poem. Thanks for sharing it. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (7/7/2013 10:18:00 PM)

    a good enjoyable poem. a nice read. a good drama (Report) Reply

  • Yash Shinde (10/18/2012 9:24:00 AM)

    ha ha ha ha....................how does it feel please describe...well liked your poem very much.................a humourous experience man.: -) (Report) Reply

  • (10/17/2012 11:54:00 PM)

    ha ha ha....how does being dead feel like? What if dead people, or their souls, or whatever that remains (if anything does!) , would step next to their bodies and look at themselves? Interesting questions you are raising. (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (10/15/2012 2:00:00 AM)

    Oh NDE! ! ! you are good at building up tension by images...it's dramatic...Sleep has an equalizing effect like Death...nicely done!
    say thank God you are back...
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  • (8/24/2012 1:23:00 AM)

    dude..nice stuff...but u need to be a bit of rhyming...it says that u have written as para a just split it into few lines.... (Report) Reply

  • (8/16/2012 6:31:00 AM)

    Awesome poem. love it (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Seale (8/1/2012 5:43:00 PM)

    Sounds like me last night, so hot, and tossed and turned and dreamed I was dead too! Not a very fun dream. Good write! -Kelly. (Report) Reply

  • Jenna Chryste (7/21/2012 11:08:00 AM)

    love it! it is hardly ever that one is to find a well-written humorous poem ;) (Report) Reply

  • (7/14/2012 9:55:00 AM)

    hahaha.. good one :) (Report) Reply

  • (7/4/2012 5:13:00 AM)

    nice, simple but funny. dead indeed! (Report) Reply

  • Natasha Hochar (6/29/2012 7:09:00 AM)

    When a poem makes you laugh and read on expectation, you know it's good.
    Nice work! :)
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  • (6/25/2012 10:09:00 AM)

    I really like this one man :) haha it's well written, nice work :) (Report) Reply

  • (6/19/2012 9:06:00 AM)

    Hehehehehe, it's real is cool! some poets say sleep is the twin of death! (Report) Reply

  • Vincent Kuo (6/2/2012 4:36:00 PM)

    I am uncertain of your intentions of this poem, though I did find it somewhat comedic, especially how you phrased the last two lines. (Report) Reply

  • (5/14/2012 10:05:00 AM)

    poem tells alot. I love the way it is written. Very well made and thought through. I enjoyed it.10/10 (Report) Reply

  • (4/10/2012 7:38:00 PM)

    THE SLEEP OF DEATH-flip a coin (Report) Reply

  • ~....my Life Is My Poem....~ (3/16/2012 9:36:00 AM)

    amazing..this poem first puts us in confusion and then let our laugh free...yet there is a great punch and truth hidden.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 23, 2011

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