I Was Dead Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s
I Was Dead
I had my dinner and
Slept around 10 of night
After a couple hour or so
I found myself dead
Ya, I was dead
My body had become motionless
Eyes shut, hands erect
What about my dreams and aims
All gone, all shattered
Man, I was dead
What next?
Possibly burn, bury and ashes
Suddenly I heard someone shouting
Idiot get up!it's 7 of morning
If you want to know the truth
I was sleeping.
ha ha ha ha....................how does it feel please describe...well liked your poem very much.................a humourous experience man.: -)
Original with a great expression that brings the reader into your world with ease, great title!
Beautiful poem on Life and death having stunning expression by means of a dream. The feeling of death and after it's condition have been painted cutely and touchingly. The reality comes after dream when a person wakes up. The last three lines reveal the truth. It may be quoted.......... Suddenly I heard someone shouting Idiot get up! it's 7 of morning If you want to know the truth I was sleeping. Fantastic dear Abhimanyu fantastic!
Very expressive, it can suddenly grab attention of people... True feeling...
Well expressed with death and life. Thank you poet.
Well expressed about death and life, Thank you Poet.
Possibly burn, bury and ashes Suddenly I heard someone shouting Idiot get up! it's 7 of morning If you want to know the truth I was sleeping. great write 10++++++++++++++++++
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11/26/2022 11:11:48 AM # 1.0.0.1053
nice, simple but funny. dead indeed!