Life is guided by fate,
Fate is guided by her talk,
Can fate wait for her? .
She has the divine gift,
To put you asleep in seconds.
As it is she who can,
Take your life in a span.
I swear on her,
She never knows about her magic.
But i have a doubt,
Whether she thinks well,
Or goes only with worst.
Simple, smooth and subtle..yet it's stunning! ! ! ! Good one! ! ! ! Hats off! ! !
Hi, Love has ceartain sprigged virtues in our life.. Stay awake our mind to fight with fate..a good piece of work..I rate u a 10
Sentiments are expressed with feelings not much with a thought... it has its own way of understanding! Thanks.
Hey man, the poem is awesome and I love it.Be focused and don't mind what people comment, what you are is in you.
I read someone write that you should be careful with your spelling. Don't mind it. As long as you are understood, this is the most important thing in writing. Grammary, etc...is secondary. I love your styles....This one is simple but full of essences of life...In French we say Merci.(Thank you) .
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
love makes you see things you never thought you would. just be careful on your spellings. great thought though