' I ' Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

' I '

Rating: 3.3

I am a soul
Your life force
I am the driver
Really just a pinpoint of life
My throne between my brows
Detach from the world around me.

I am a ruler
Ruler of all my sense organs
In the problems of days
Your changing ways
I remain as I am, as
I am just a peaceful soul.

I feel far away from you
Away from the physical world
I am beyond your world
Beyond from intellect and traits
I am peaceful here
I am a meta soul.

' I '
Wednesday, July 20, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: soul,spiritual
Rajendran Muthiah 14 January 2012

Dear friend, Being a meta soul beyond the comprehension of intellect and imagination. you are a mystic gone deep into that world seeking communion with the Eternal. This kind of poem everyone can not write. Those who are bereft of ambition, affection, animosity, amoral sense.. alone can plunge into this distant world. A well written poem.Your meditation has transported you to a higher level to see His world. Cheers for pouring lines of the metaphysical world.

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Kevin East 14 January 2012

Nice. Spiritual and easy on the ear. Well done.

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John Raubenheimer 13 January 2012

It must help you to have a picture in your mind of the soul. I quite like the idea of the soul on a throne between your brows. I like that because it seems an original idea, while concepts like the meta soul slip past me, perhaps because it or they are borrowed from one or other religion. No?

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Eric Cockrell 13 January 2012

the universal 'i', that transcends the body, and concepts. very good one!

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Jenny Gordon 12 January 2012

Very interesting and thought-provoking with good imagery. Almost rather fascinating. Hmm.

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Powerful prospective!

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ruchita vaishnav 29 December 2017

Wonderful poems..

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Harishkumarns 15 December 2017

Super sir.....

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Kunal vaishnav 15 December 2017

Awsome poem....πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒβœŒβœŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™Œ

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Bhagya 14 December 2017

Superb sir....

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