' I ' Poem by abhimanyu kumar.s

' I '

Rating: 3.3


I am a soul
Your life force
I am the driver
Really just a pinpoint of life
My throne between my brows
Detach from the world around me.

I am a ruler
Ruler of all my sense organs
In the problems of days
Your changing ways
I remain as I am, as
I am just a peaceful soul.

I feel far away from you
Away from the physical world
I am beyond your world
Beyond from intellect and traits
I am peaceful here
I am a meta soul.

' I '
Wednesday, July 20, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: soul,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kara Towe 15 January 2012

Good but what is a meta soul?

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Beautiful poem indeed

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Trevor Priddy 12 January 2012

another job well done ^_^

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Thando Mashinini 12 January 2012

I am beyond your world Beyond from intellect and traits....now this is short and Mind challenging, I really like it. It's a pure description of a soul, U also reflected that the soul doesn't actually abide by Majority rule. Wonderful man, great piece of poetry! GOD bless!

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Jenny Gordon 12 January 2012

Very interesting and thought-provoking with good imagery. Almost rather fascinating. Hmm.

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Powerful prospective!

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ruchita vaishnav 29 December 2017

Wonderful poems..

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Harishkumarns 15 December 2017

Super sir.....

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Kunal vaishnav 15 December 2017

Awsome poem....πŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒπŸ‘ŒβœŒβœŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™Œ

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Bhagya 14 December 2017

Superb sir....

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