Abyss Poem by Tom Allport
Abyss
Sunken Dreams
To the icy depths
Gathered then locked
Into the black abyss
Titanic tears
Were never the less
Like survivor's love
Forever in distress.
Very good use of words: Sunken - icy depths- the black abyss- Titanic tears- survivor's- forever in distress. All these words increased the emotional impact as did the title. Well written, Tom..
Sunken dreams and survivor's love which remain in forever in distress. provoke thought. Loss is so sad. This is brilliantly penned poem is shared with perception...10
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Human often creates black holes for ourselves