Accepting The Will Of Fate [ 2 Tanka ] Poem by Nudershada Cabanes

Accepting The Will Of Fate [ 2 Tanka ]

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We just go through life
Drifting wherever it flows
Entrusting our life
To the hands of the divine
Accepting the will of fate

Like driftwood floating
In the middle of the sea
We are sometimes tossed
Into life's deepest ocean
Without seeing the shoreline

Friday, March 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: fate,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 16 April 2022

A fantastic Tanka! This great poem has a strong leg.....liked it

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 March 2018

A beautiful poem masterly crafted. It depicts the realities of life.10

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Nudershada Cabanes 23 March 2018

Thank you Rose Marie for your warm comment and for the visit.

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Perdita Young 23 March 2018

Excellent metaphor about the mortal journey of life... Sometimes it's really foolish to struggle against the almighty Fate.

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