Addicted Poem by katie badham

Addicted

Rating: 5.0


images go through me, him and me
so romantic, so happy
yet if you rip that wall paper away you find just a wall
when looking at it makes me feel so small
addicted to his smell
addicted to his laugh
addicted him in all it is hell
It's not like a pencil when you rub the mark out
it's always in my head, it messes me about
i will confess i am addicted

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siddharth Singh 30 March 2010

When love stamps you its no better than an addiction. Very true and nice.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 30 March 2010

Nice poem and we all addicted to life it seems.

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jimmy zepp 30 March 2010

I consider addiction to a certain person, sth spontaneous, uncontrollably strong feeling, where everything else subsides...It's better to be addicted to love, rather than drugs or drinks, the 1st might give you a hope, whilst the last two, for sure, might bring you down! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10+++

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 12 April 2010

An inner sublime experience is very romantically expressed.

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Sadiqullah Khan 01 April 2010

Your Addiction I am red of the poppy That is bled white I am love of the seas In whose bosom Sets the glowing sun Rises the blue moon I am your dream I am your addiction .........nice poem.10

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Sadiqullah Khan 01 April 2010

Your Addiction I am red of the poppy That is bled white I am love of the seas In whose bosom Sets the glowing sun Rises the blue moon I am your dream I am your addiction .........nice poem.10

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C. P. Sharma 31 March 2010

It's beautiful, Yes, addicted we are, addicted to fiction. CP

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C. P. Sharma 31 March 2010

It's beautiful, Yes, addicted we are, We are addicted to fiction. CP

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