Adieu Poem by Hannatu Pqrs

Adieu

Rating: 5.0


Now the end has come
But why must you depart,
When there is still space in this world
For another Kindheart?

We have come a long way
How many storms have we weathered
Together, how much bliss have our hearts enjoyed,
For it all to end this way?

We did vow from the beginning never to say adieu
And if God decides otherwise,
Who are we, egotistic mortals, to challenge Him?
Does this mean our friendship simply dies?

Since we met, we've lived our lives together, all the way
As I hold your hand on your deathbed now,
I've only got this to say:
Tarry awhile, dear: our reunion is a while away!

Wednesday, November 11, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: death,friendship,goodbye,mortality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ifeanyi John Nwokeabia 02 December 2020

It's pathetic to loss dear one. Beautiful piece!

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Hannatu Adamu 03 December 2020

Glad you thought so. Thanks for stopping by!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 November 2020

A poignant and touching poem Well conveyed.

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Hannatu Adamu 15 November 2020

I'm glad you found it so. Thanks.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 11 November 2020

Amen. I hope writing the poem helped to ease the heartache

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Hannatu Adamu 15 November 2020

Thankfully, it's fictional. Thank you for your comment.

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Varsha M 11 November 2020

A very sad melancholic poem with encaptivating impending adieu never desired or cherished yet we all at times have to face them.

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Hannatu Adamu 15 November 2020

Yes indeed. Goodbyes are often so. Thank you.

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