Advice Poem by hassan hayati

Advice

Rating: 5.0


Deeply disappointed by the failures
And suffered from the defeats
His grandfather, that gold heart,
That white hair, He meets

Wisely the old scientist reveals
Our great poet Bahar has a Couplet,
My dear son,
Listen please

(It greatly deserves for human to do
The insistence of the Nail, his life's clue
The more severe the Hammer is
The more insistent the nail is)

Advice
Wednesday, September 23, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: advice
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 21 June 2021

'The more severe the Hammer is The more insistent the nail is'.... true....indeed a good advice....5*****

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Dana Ghaffari 24 October 2020

so good... i liked the way you advised...

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Deluke Muwanigwa 23 September 2020

Good advice in good poem. " I would rather be a hammer than a nail"

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