Sun And The Sea Poem by hassan hayati

Sun And The Sea

Rating: 3.5


Spreading her silk scarlet hair,
On the ocean's blue chest and bare
The scene might be described in the Genesis
The soft waves curling the long tresses
As if combing the hairs golden and wet
The sun is about to set
Sun and the sea both quiet and calm
Listening to the seagulls
Or to the lovers sitting on the stones, sands or harbor walls
Oh sea, unburden, speak to me
So sad is your silent whisper
I talk to you; you keep looking at my eyes
How much I desire to be
A drop in your lovely body
Or a drop of rain among those thousands
Then sank into your open hands
But now I only sigh which is sweet, while it harms
I am drowned in your charms
Your beauty is being hidden when disappears the sun
I listen to your roars in dark, you are sad
The sun is gone
But there is always a way
There is always a new day

Sun And The Sea
Sunday, April 29, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,hope,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 May 2018

NICE SUNNY POETRY I TAKE SNAPS OF SUNSETS MANY DO READ ME IN PLENTY YOU WILL BE SUNNY

2 0 Reply
Dr Antony Theodore 04 June 2019

The scene might be described in the Genesis The soft waves curling the long tresses As if combing the hairs golden and wet The sun is about to set Sun and the sea both quiet and calm. a wonderful descripiton of nature... very fine. tony

0 0 Reply
Hassan Hayati 07 June 2019

I appreciate your kind concern, it realy makes me happy to see the opinion of an expert on my writings. Big thanks.

0 0
Amir Marandi 03 January 2019

Beautiful poem. Captured the story of love and loss. Excellent imagery.10+++

0 0 Reply
Hassan Hayati 05 January 2019

Thank you Amir Jan for the kind and valuable comment, I appreciate your attention.

0 0
Jennifer Birchall 27 December 2018

Beautiful imagery captured in this poem Hassan.

2 0 Reply
Hassan Hayati 29 December 2018

I appreciate your kind concern, thanks, thanks

0 0
Akhtar Jawad 18 December 2018

But there is always a way There is always a new day The sun sets at the dusk to come back at the dawn. Nights are for the moon to continue the love story. Beautiful poem.

1 0 Reply
Hassan Hayati 18 December 2018

I appreciate your encouraging comments

0 0
Khairul Ahsan 19 June 2018

Sun and sea, it seems, have an eternal bond between themselves. A nice poem with an equally nice graphic.

2 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success