The world is so unfair
all that's happening were rare.
Unexpectedly, things come without accession.
That's why people share their
different reactions.
Though all are part of a challenge
still it can't make us allure.
Though we need to face it
without asking any favor,
then why it baffles me
who should i adore?
I need to know where I am now,
Am I still waiting for the broken vow?
Oh gosh!
To have inside me this anger
but in waiting of you...
why am I this eager?
Having this desperate days without you,
it makes me weak inside as I think of you.
It took eon for me to think of it,
Should I gave you a chance even a bit?
It's hard to stumble and fall
that's why I shatter my spite all.
Thinking thou trifle to me?
No! Since this affection attacked me.
As my heart beats
when you gaze at me
this feeling cruels
truly inside me...
After then I realized
I can't shun you...
I can't deny you and even surrender you...
My words were allot enough
For you to know that
letting you go hurts me so..
Copyright © by Ronalyn 'Rhona' T. Fabi
(An original poem written on the 9th day of May 2005.)
(This literary piece is govern with the rights of the author. Anyone who wants to use this poem should first ask the author or contact at reiyuucy_26@yahoo.com)
wonderful poem...well written theme with emotion and intention...nice piece...10
the still ness fill the feelings Am I still waiting for the broken vow? Oh gosh! To have inside me this anger but in waiting of you... why am I this eager?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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