Break Up (After All...) Poem by rhona fabi

Break Up (After All...)

Rating: 4.8


Criticize my smile it's fake.
My eyes tears out and now like a lake.
This is the effect of what you've made,
Since when my heart gets totally break.

Oh, somehow I must not use to think
of how a vow vanished in a blink.
Must I just let myself to be linked
to the perfect one as what you think?

I tried my best to have all things mend,
But why can't I ever make pretend?
I only see myself with knees bend,
crying out 'Why everything meets end? '

The times before when you are beside,
makes the sky and stars collide
but not today that their shine subside
when we set our commitment aside.

Oh, you know it's hard for me to find,
a guy like you with a different mind.
The one I thought who's one of a kind
that god has chosen for me to bind.

You're as special as my first kiss,
and as special as honey bees.
That whole you, you know, I so much miss,
and letting go of you really is geez.

From you I wish I could fly up high,
but asking myself 'Why can't I fly? '
When'er I remember you, I cry.
Since then I have learned it love can't lie.

Copyright © 2008 by Ronalyn 'Rhona' T. Fabi
(An original poem written on the 11th day of November 2007. I just came from break up with JBC. Rivera five days ago when I was inspired enough to shower my feelings on this poem.)

(This literary piece is govern with the rights of the author. Anyone who wants to use this poem should first ask the author or contact at reiyuucy_26@yahoo.com)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 03 August 2009

well expressed of emotion and crafted into poetic rendition...some words cannot comprehend like ' onlu '....but the intention is well defined....

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