Africa Awakes Poem by Irene C S ClarkHogg

Africa Awakes

Rating: 5.0


Africa Awakes.


Early morning: a mist enshrouded scene.
The coughing of a lion: Surrealistic dream.
Far in the distance, a frantic scream.


The neat feet of the dainty gazelle,
A blur as she flees, who can tell
Which predator stalks the one who fell.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 13 February 2008

Very nicely done. Stirs up the imagination and elicits sights and sounds of the wild. I can see the pictures and hear the scream. And it doesn't eliminate the human question.

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C. P. Sharma 05 October 2009

A mystic awakening, perhaps the beast in man - strong suggestive imagery very well knitted into the theme. CP

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Africa's mysterious cycle caught in your words.a ten...

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 20 January 2009

Short beautiful poem with visual imagery which awakes thoughts and meanings.

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Rebekah Gamble 30 June 2008

What I like most about this poem is that various readers can take it to mean various things. I like that however you perceive the setting of the poem can drive how you perceive the poem itself. It's open to the mind and imagination. It's open to any emotion you see or wish to see in it.

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Ivor Hogg 31 March 2008

Brief but full of meaning evoking strong visuals

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