As I grow old and frail
Let my mind be forever young
As I try not to trip and fall
Let my young mind leap in bounds
A good wish! Perfectly written. And in perfect balance, nothing need to be added or taken away. Congratulations, and may your wish be granted!
Thank you, Sandra for the great feedback. And for granting me that wish, as I age gracefully. And for that mighty 10. Greatly appreciate all of your support!
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What a lovely prayer! This is my prayer too! May God grant our wishes!
Forever young in mind body spirit!