Alankar(Decor) -237 Poem by Indira Renganathan
Alankar(Decor) -237
The Kimo is an Israeli version of the haiku.
The defining feature is that there should be no movement in the imagery.
The elements of the Kimo are:
a tristich, a 3 line poem.
syllabic 10-7-6 syllables per line.
the images should be stationary
unrhymed.
1. The Dead Silence
Done corpse is dumb in the burial ground
There prevails a dead silence
The co-dead of the corpse
2. Festival Navaratri
Nine steps and more for the dolls set to stand
Don't talk, don't move but godly
Can we see gods' deeds loud?
Dead silence is reveled and prevailed in burial ground. In the festival of Navaratri Nine steps and more for the dolls are set to stand. The DECOR is beautifully narrated with meaningful words. An interesting poem is shared is beautiful.10
Your comments give me so much encouragement Kumar...thanks and God bless you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Your effort to introduce us with different forms of poem is praise worthy.In the above two poems 'Silence'is discussed, One is dead silence like co-dead of corpse.In other there is no-talk, no movement, but silence is godly.
Thank you Bharati...your analytical comment gives me immense pleasure...I like it a lot...thanks again and God bless you