Tinnitus(Staccato)
Staccato an invented stanzaic form which attempts to emulate the musical staccato rhythm with
emphatic two syllable refrains inserted in L3 and L6 of each stanza.
Jan Turner created a form with internal rhyme and variable meter. The elements of the Staccato are:
stanzaic, written in 2 or more sixains.
metric, iambic, L1, L2, L5, L6 are pentameter, L3 and L4 are tetrameter.
rhymed aabbcc ddeeff gghhii. Internal rhyme occurs between L1 and L2 midway in the lines.
written with an emphatic, two syllable refrain repeated twice at the beginning of L3 and
once at the beginning of L6 of each stanza.
Tinnitus
Ringing ringing in the ears, what is that
Droning droning up the head, who is that
Explored, explored none seen around
Puzzling puzzling, fear screams aloud
Quest and questions, answerless mystery
explored, implored, bad, bad, bad history
Tinnitus, it is tinnitus ringing
Tinnitus, it is tinnitus droning
Buzzing buzzing no cicadas
No bell, no phone inside the ears
Ear, heart, hurt and putrid, may be a fault
Buzzing "warning! ! " says the doctor's report
Cureless nuisance, a disease tinnitus
Cryptic nuisance, in old folks noisy tease
Beware beware, no harmony
Nor a music of melody
Yet so musical you may feel at first
Beware, but of no way to escape fast
Note:
Tinnitus: a ringing or booming sensation in one or both ears; a symptom of an ear infection
or Meniere's disease
Meniere's disease: a disease of the inner ear characterized by episodes of dizziness
and tinnitus and progressive hearing loss (usually unilateral)
A brilliant poem. Very informative. Thanks for sharing, Indira.10
A very informative and useful decor dear madam! Thanks for sharing! Stay always happy and blessed!
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I would like to translate this poem
You have described exactly the ailment that can affect the ears named Tinnitus! ! For sometime, I suffered from it in my left ear and eventually my hearing got impaired! It was so annoying. Thank God now that buzzing sound has subsided!