A Recipe(Uneven Couplet) -
The uneven couplet is paired lines of different length
rhymed or unrhymed, metered or unmetered.
A Recipe
That you would relish I'm sure
This recipe try it with pleasure
Clean the insight in time sufficient
Wash off anger, enmity and hate
Put the mind on the burning heart
Put in the thoughts all to melt
Ladle in between a large of intellect
Stir in hope a heapful amount
Let all blend with a bliss intent
Until valour and courage result
Throw meantime in the flaming heart
Burnt to ashes filth and lust
Fervid heart now isn't violent
Mind is calm and tranquil incessant
Mix in now gently prayers and spirit
Still more gently the gods to let meditate
Season with peace and harmony pleasant
Garnish with joy and cheer concordant
Serve in the bowl of soul consonant
Enjoy with love consistent
Try and taste this recipe carefully
Tell me 'delicious, delicious' finally
Thank you friend....wish you the same and a happy New Year too
Throw meantime in the flaming heart/Burnt to ashes filth and ...every couplet of this wonderful verse is praiseworthy. Your Decor-87 is indeed a masterpiece!
Garnish with joy and cheer concordant, Enjoy with love consistent........Truly enjoyed this delightful poem. Voted already. Adding it to my favourite now.
Wash off anger, enmity and hate, Put in the thoughts all to melt, Stir in hope a heapful amount,
Dear Indira Ma'm, Reading this poem again with much interest. It is a wonderful recipe.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A value laden piece of work! So informative...a piece of diamond dear madam, a piece of sparkling diamond! My pleasure revisiting this marvelous work!
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