Monday, August 4, 2008

Alankar(Decor) -87

Rating: 5.0
A Recipe(Uneven Couplet) -
The uneven couplet is paired lines of different length
rhymed or unrhymed, metered or unmetered.

A Recipe

That you would relish I'm sure
This recipe try it with pleasure

Clean the insight in time sufficient
Wash off anger, enmity and hate

Put the mind on the burning heart
Put in the thoughts all to melt

Ladle in between a large of intellect
Stir in hope a heapful amount

Let all blend with a bliss intent
Until valour and courage result

Throw meantime in the flaming heart
Burnt to ashes filth and lust

Fervid heart now isn't violent
Mind is calm and tranquil incessant

Mix in now gently prayers and spirit
Still more gently the gods to let meditate

Season with peace and harmony pleasant
Garnish with joy and cheer concordant

Serve in the bowl of soul consonant
Enjoy with love consistent

Try and taste this recipe carefully
Tell me 'delicious, delicious' finally
Indira Renganathan
Topic(s) of this poem: poem,spiritual
Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2020
This poem is truly a great Hot poem chosen and featured. We are happy seeing your this lovely poem as Hot poem. This is delicious ad delicious as we feel it tenderly. A nice poem is chosen really! Congratulations! Many, Many Congratulations!
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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 October 2020
I'm delighted to find that you are poet #429 today! This great poem has recently got wide readership which subsequently has increased your ranking. Many congratulations to you dear madam! Stay always happy and blessed!
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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 October 2020
It is really a marvelous poem with lofty theme that attracts many poets and poetesses. I appreciate it. Congratulations for this poem being stood in hot poems. Visited time and again.
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Varsha M 12 October 2020
Yes it's delicious delicious indeed. Loved to taste it. Beautiful poem ma'am. Congratulations for being chosen as hot poem. Beautiful.
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Bharati Nayak 12 October 2020
A great write- -Every read is a delight.
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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 September 2020
A value laden piece of work! So informative...a piece of diamond dear madam, a piece of sparkling diamond! My pleasure revisiting this marvelous work!
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Indira Renganathan 14 October 2020
Thank you Dillip for your kind e mail notification from PH to me on this selection...Thanks to PH too for honouring me this way.. you have closed your comment I am conveying my thanks to you here...May God bless you with all the best in life
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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 16 September 2020
Loved this wonderful recipe, a delicious soup for the soul......100
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Chinedu Dike 01 May 2020
A free flight of creativity on winged imagination. A witty piece of poetry, well conceived and elegantly brought forth in persuasive expressions with artistic brilliance. Thanks for sharing, madam.
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Magadha Rani 20 December 2019
A great poem dear mam! Liked it. thank you for sharing....10++++++(Magadha)
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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 August 2019
Serve in the bowl of soul consonant/Enjoy with love consistent.....a great poem! My pleasure reading this wonderful piece of work time and again!
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