The Complete Couplet is a poetic unit of 2 lines
that expresses a complete thought within itself.
Meter and rhyme are at the poet's discretion.
Attired, Adorned, Offered-
(Some complete couplets on the nine planets)
Sanguine Sun spotted red with ruby
Ingrained wheat for food salty sweetly
Milky Moon moving around white and pearly
Rich and ricey for minds and hearts happy
Coral Mars in enraged orange balled colorfully
Feasting leguminous with red legume family
Ever green Mercury enrolled with emerald verdantly
Fed with green bean pulsatively
Giant Jupiter yellowing in sapphire edifyingly
Grand connoisseur of chicpeas tastily
White Venus spangling diamonded masterfully
Vacillated for snowy lablab more ravingly
Slow and steady Saturn blues in sapphire auspiciously
Grubbing over sesame mirthfully
Ascending up the node yellowed in garnet luminously
Blackened Rahu pulsed for black gram suplicatingly
Descending down the node with cat's eye lustrously
Darkened Ketu squirms gulping horse gram blessingly
very colorful pictures and metaphors of the planetary system, profoundly viewed and philosphical,10
indiraji.. rhyming thoughts...astronomical'....wavelength.... careful..handling of...poetic expressions... regards..and great inspiration..
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VERY NICE AND COLORFUL DESCRIPTION OF THE STARS AND THE SOLAR SYSTEM. READ MY NEW POEMS 1. MOVE TOWARDS AKNOWN GOAL 2. CREATE A STORY OF YOUR OWN 3. OUTSIDE WORLD