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Ability-2

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Vagabond the husband..
Job to job, place to place
Loitering in unsteady wandering
His own wishful ideology

Towed wife followed in silence
Dragged to get abraded
Of frequent packing and unpacking

Fueled his reasonless loathing routine
Smoldering her sparkles to rupture
Bursted the female heart one day

On decision of no divorce
Her silent angst but to settle
An occupation and destination
Permanent for herself

All with blessed guts she scored
Raising high her children
Her status, her house..a happy home

And her vagabond hubby...
A regular Sunday-visitor
Hosteling to relish her

'Jansi Rani'(I call her so) ..
Her clever silence is composed
For her daughters, for their marriage
So not to break her own wedlock

Monday, September 21, 2009
Sunday Poems: 91 / 500
Topic(s) of this poem: social
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 29 September 2017

Life is itself a compromise, parents who reall y love their children have no alternate but to continue as sposes, whatever the circumstances may be.

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Indira Renganathan 01 October 2017

Thank you Akhar...I'm happy to have your comments again and again...thanks and God bless you

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 March 2016

Her clever silence is composed! Nice work.

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Vidi Writes 05 October 2009

That's being Clever.... than Courageous An intelligent look into History and Current Surely reveals whats there in store and not to hop The one who can adjust in the given carpet Surely to reap enough yeild. Better to be aside the fire pan Than being fried on an open ground At summer, fire irritates At winter it warms up Cool thoughts.... I don't know... how many agree... But... is a simple fact. Good subject... good read.

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Moushumi moushumi 05 October 2009

A salute to ur honest feeling & to the poet for a truthful poetry blended with real & reel life....10+++

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Varsha M 30 July 2021

Ma'am very well penned. This is what always happen. Women always bow and obey only for good but when it comes for me they never never do.

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A great poem well crafted and presented.

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A great woman and mother will sacrifice everything for the sake of her children even her happiness and comfort.

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Robert Murray Smith 10 February 2021

A woman of resilience knows what's best for her family.

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Savita Tyagi 10 February 2021

Great a poem. I wrote a comment lengthier than 300 words and is deleted by PH! good to read you Indra ji.

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