Albatross Poem by Petra Novakova

Albatross

Rating: 4.3


The rotting corpse of the Albatross lies
on the other side of the silver-tongued coils
dead in the pitch black of the ocean
rest all its enemies yet no victors
are left to celebrate their survival
for no one ever comes to weep over
the body of an Albatross.

Wednesday, September 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: death,nature,serenity
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by S.T. Coleridge's The Rime of the Ancient Mariner.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 27 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Petra. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Kamiel Choi 27 September 2017

Interesting! Not sure if I understand it. Good imagery of the rotting bird, and its enemies who are dead but have survived (?) Have they only survived physically, but not poetically, because nobody was there to remember them? And what is the relation between celebrating their survival and weeping over the body of their victim?

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Petra Novakova 27 September 2017

Actually, you got the gist of it. Everyone is gone one way or another. There is no victory to be found in another's death regardless of how it came to be. In general, death leaves pain and an all-encompassing sense of loss in its wake. I'm afraid that this is not a very pleasant poem.

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Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken 27 September 2017

Nice piece of work Petra Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken

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