All Alone Poem by Sneha Murali
All Alone
the awful feeling of being alone
when night time comes and the light is gone
i look at the stars across the nightsky bright
my eyes with fear and my heart with fright
a chilling feeling crawling down my neck
absolutely no eyes to look upon me
all at once invisible, out of sight
sitting with my heart beating, only mine
not a soul, no fly, no mouse
not a footstep creeped inside the house
the only company being the leaves rushing in
left to my own thoughts, a world of silence
next day, staring at the brick wall
no sound, no sight, feeling deaf and dumb
the only life, i live alone
for never a gain come my way
around me, ghosts, spirits of my past
reliving each second from dusk to dawn
a nightmare during day, my sleeps
a stone hit upon my glass soul
walking a line, as thin as my life
a fall could mean sheer disaster
but what more disaster do i need
my balloon like life deflating faster
my only guests being - hate and neglect
my only friends being- myself and i
withering away like a dead rose
like a plant that has not been watered
Copyright © 2009 by Sneha Murali
nice written and good work.lonelyness sucks but feels sometimes great... keep writing
wow.... it just makes u feel so sorry for the character thats all alone, if its actually you then i feel even more sorry but hope this changes, but good thing about experiencing tough times in life is that u can make an absaloutly beautiful poem out of it just like this one. love the ryhming/rhyming! lol :)
great work! People usually have a tendency to exaggerate a lot while writing on such topics. But you have put it in the best way possible! hats off to you! these are my favourite lines walking a line.....deflating faster
enjoy the loneliness....... we all are alone in life............
i hope it came from your creativity.............. God bless you! ! ! ! ! !
Please look at the other half, the positive one and enjoy in your loneliness. CP
Please look at the other half, the positive one and enjoy in your loneliness. CP
gud read but loliess is much more than it it is much more pain which has to be thr in ur words
wonderful composition on loneliness... lovely to read..10 up.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 3:49:03 AM # 1.0.0.1119
being alone is so so so much terrible. i have felt this thing fear which u expressed u well in the poem excellent work ;)