Almost Poem by Sonya Florentino

Almost

Rating: 5.0


I can almost feel you
taste you smell
your skin
your sweat
your hair
your perfurme everywhere

I can almost feel you
kissing me tonight
I can almost feel you
touching me just right

I can almost hear your heart
Beating just like mine
I can almost hear us breathing
breathing, breathe in time

I can almost feel you with me
in me deep inside i can swear you're
in me in me till I cry...

I can almost hear you whisper
whisper... dear goodnight

I know I'll be sleeping sleeping
well tonight... well tonight... well ...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eddie Roa 03 February 2009

Sounds desperate, but, the longing is palpably expressed in an almost 'stream of consciousness' unfolding of the verse. nice write

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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