Almost Poem by Sonya Florentino

Almost

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I can almost feel you
taste you smell
your skin
your sweat
your hair
your perfurme everywhere

I can almost feel you
kissing me tonight
I can almost feel you
touching me just right

I can almost hear your heart
Beating just like mine
I can almost hear us breathing
breathing, breathe in time

I can almost feel you with me
in me deep inside i can swear you're
in me in me till I cry...

I can almost hear you whisper
whisper... dear goodnight

I know I'll be sleeping sleeping
well tonight... well tonight... well ...

Thursday, January 22, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: goodnight
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eddie Roa 03 February 2009

Sounds desperate, but, the longing is palpably expressed in an almost 'stream of consciousness' unfolding of the verse. nice write

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Sonya Florentino

Sonya Florentino

Manila, Philippines (residing NYC)
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