Give a child a stick
Watch her create magic, there!
in front of your eyes
© 2009 Sonya Florentino
A child, a stick so many scenerios, well versed
good senryu Sonya...where did you get a stick? 10
Full of wonder, like a child's world. The artist retains innocence too and you have created your own magic.
great little senryu, Sonya. nice image, very tight, every word in place.
A child with a stick? ? ? Magic is bound to happen, dear.......whether black or white....i dont know.....
LIke this senryu my surprise that you have written one. I must explore further to see what otheer poetic forms you have used.
I like the senryu, and you have done it well. The simplicity of the poem and child endears =)
A brilliant senryu - the subject is also well chosen...Congratulations 10+++++
a child is not imprisoned to life...it's creativity and joy is boundless..hard to believe this your first senryu..beautiful
An excellent piece..
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