Alone Poem by Selena Luna

Alone

Rating: 3.0


Someday you'll regret leaving me so soon
When you get too lonely under the moon

You've given me time to roam
And with that I'll never come home

I was brought into this world alone
But I wasn't born with this dark tone

It was something I grew accustomed to
Which you helped with too

But I would never give you credit
Cause it's something we regretted

Though you made me feel alive
You also killed me inside

Monday, July 27, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: heartache,heartbreak,lonely,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abubakar Abdulkadir 29 July 2015

So lovely. Spiced with rhymes. brimfilled with emotions and fine usage of words.

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Athanasius Okowa 27 July 2015

just the emotion is enough to draw blood.. good job with the rhyme... alone+tone

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Allotey Abossey 27 July 2015

Wow.. Poetry is truly a beautiful way to express one's thought and feelings. You did it beautifully but it pays to also known that certain things happen to make us better people for the future. We may not have to be with everyone that come our way. Stay blessed my friend

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