Alone Poem by Viola Grey

Alone

Rating: 4.5


Walking alone
through lifes rocky path
with nothing steady
to break my fall.
Broken on rocks
cutting the air,
bleeding on shores
never waning.
Crimson tide smiles
wash me away,
dragging my heart
into forever.

23/07/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ron Flowers 03 November 2008

A hearfelt poem. I love it. Ron

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Heath Harrington 19 October 2008

I think I'm on that rocky road right now. it flows so well. thx Heath

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Shimon Weinroth 14 September 2008

poignant metaphors with much insight best wishes Shimon

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Tango 24 August 2008

Life consists of many a rocky road, as you have so nicely put. an excellent write. Tango.

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 06 August 2008

touching poem, thanks for sharing

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Simon Collins 03 May 2012

You are a real inspiration, clear and deep, awesome!

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Bullion Grey 08 May 2009

seems sad yet we all are dragged into the forever....could be, that last line a title for a novel? thank you for sharing.... BG

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Tis a sad poem but I really liked how the crimson tide smiles on you. Great imagery and writing as usual. Karin Anderson

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Mark R Slaughter 16 April 2009

Great pathos and melancholy in this poem Viola, heartfelt indeed. Hope it isn't true though! Mark

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*Trusting You* 29 November 2008

this has great images for your reader... and I love your ending. this is writen very well. good job. Becca

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