Alone Poem by akram saqib

Alone

Rating: 3.3


When you are not
Then cries are fraught
Pain and agony
Again hold on me
Dreams often awake
Screams do smack
DrOP me behind
Crop up in mind
Fears make tremble
Tears then ramble
On the rosy cheeks
Moan with shrieks
Why you are not?
Why you are not?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

bearing alone is realm of life

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Dr Kamran Haider 03 April 2009

This is a simple, sweetly sad and skillful write... Touches the heart and I can relate my feelings... Good read indeed... Thanks for sharing...

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 03 April 2009

Being alone, is a state of being and in my opinion is not a sentence that signals dejection, rejection or isolation. Instead can be used positively as atime for reflection and introspection.Some of us could do wit with some alone time just to hear our own thoughts! Controversial this piece. E

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Catrina Heart 02 April 2009

To be alone is such a dejected state, soreness of one's heart flowed through the stream of lines.......lovely!

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Saim Sa 31 March 2009

very good friend.congratulations

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