Alone In A Castle (Part One) Poem by Lesa MRK

Alone In A Castle (Part One)

Rating: 2.9


Once there stood a castle,
With towers so tall of stone,
So strong and white
Glowing like ivory bone

In the castle lived a princess
So lovely and so kind
Many times she dreamt of him
The prince she'd someday find

When the time finally came
And they stood side by side
Her heart sang with beautiful feelings
That time could not abide

They spent all their time together
Until summer came to an end
He then kissed her and departed
Disappearing into the wind

At nights she stood and waited
But never once did he return
Her head was bent with sorrow
Her eyes swollen from tears
For she knew he would not return tomorrow
And she would be alone for all her years

She thought she had given him her heart
For what they shared was special and true
But when sorrow came he left her
For he knew nothing else to do

The princess had nothing left to hang onto
No tiny thread of hope
She had no one left to turn to
And no one to help her cope

She went to the places they had been
Yet it was not the same without him
The flowers no longer cheered her
And the bright sun had become dim

He hadn't meant to hurt her
But the princess was lost in her own woe
All she felt was betrayal
In knowing he had to go

But with time she came to realize
He did what he had to do
Although her pain was horrible
He felt that pain, too.

The two had shared so much
They had given all they had
And knowing it was truly over
Oh, how it made the princess sad

She hadn't thought she would truly lose him
No matter how bad it may have been
They were more than in love
He had been her one and only friend

One night she found a message
Scrawled on the castle wall.
It said only, 'I love you, '
And the princess's tears began to fall.

She knew she'd always miss him;
He'd remain forever in her heart,
And even if they weren't together,
They'd never truly be apart....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Charmaine Simpson 31 August 2006

Well this one made me cry Lesa - my heart had already dropped into the pit of my stomach from your last poem, and then this - You have described so well what this pain and loss feels like - your imagery is perfect, and then the closing verse just stole my emotion completely - I truly loved this piece. Charmaine x

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Preeti - is here! 10 July 2006

Lesa, Firstly i like this poem because it tells a story. Secondly it's sad this seperation and every princess has gone through it once in her life....now i'm off to read part 2. Preets

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James S. 08 July 2006

Absolutley amazing Lesa. I love this work. Haven't read the 2nd part i was too excited to tell you how great this was. I'm not a princess or anything but still an awesome piece to make you think. Great job.

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Patricia Gale 07 July 2006

Lovely, splendid, sad but yet I know the feeling of her pain. Well done!

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