Alone With Thoughts ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Alone With Thoughts ~

Rating: 5.0


When the thoughts are set in wildness
How can someone remain remain alone?
Wandering on the wings of time
On the milky ways of life -

As you unflod the sheet of past
And spread across the rivers
the world will flow with you
To the sea of the eternity.

Monday, February 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: life,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prabir Gayen 11 February 2019

where the life flies with the dove and reaches the zenith of greatness where no fear touches the body or soul it is you alone with your thoughts. Beautiful line and well crafted aloneness

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Zuzu Mutairi 11 February 2019

The limitations between The sunrise and the sunset Ceases by offering the joy of fleeting moments the rising thoughts lifts the spirit Excellent lines.

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S H 24 February 2021

We need to spend time alone.

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Deepak S S 20 October 2020

Fantastic poem, Nicely written 5**

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Bhushan Kapoor 24 March 2019

Wisely written poem.

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Gordon Walter 11 February 2019

Alone with thoughts...A wonderful poem. This happens only when mind is at peace with self.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 February 2019

EXCELLENT! The opening line alone drew me to go through with the whole write. The whole poem has been woven with wonderful thoughts that only a Poet of deep poetic soul could deliver. Each stanza stands out with superb imagery.

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