Along With The Time - Part I Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Along With The Time - Part I

Rating: 4.3


Hear me breeze, don't blow a gale
Clouds, don't pour in without bail
Stream don't cast a mighty flow
Forgive human forgetfulness.

The breeze strolled whispering tales
The clouds hastened with kisses for hills
The stream went humming towards the falls
The time said, "pace with me", I did.

Traveled around for many a months
Through the realms of seasons drift
Summer, Autumn and winter
At last across spring kingdom

What a charming world it is!
Dream palace made so splendid
Painted with bright rainbow creams
Decoration with awesome blooms

Thirst quenching cool nectar streams
Fruits sweetened with angels' beams
Bed of roses set for dreams
Spreads woven with jasmine threads

Birds singing so sweet for all
Blossoms, for sport, charming all
None for selfish motive at all
Human beings don't get it all

Hear me breeze, don't blow a gale
Clouds, don't pour in without bail
Streams don't cast a mighty flow
Forgive human forgetfulness

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 08 November 2018

So much beauty and treasure nature holds for us.But man forgets nature's grace and exploits the treasure unabashedly.Oh Nature, forgive man's folly and his forgetfulness. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.

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Thank you very much for the appreciating words. Unless man stops reckless exploitation nature will revenge with its full might which poor man will not be able to withstand

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 July 2023

Loved this beautiful poem loaded with imagery. Top score

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VIJAYA 25 January 2019

Good job. very nicely described the change of seasons and its beauty

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Thank you Vijaya

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Jayachandran C Nair; 10 December 2018

Exhuberance is Beauty of a Poet Called DPN

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Devi Krishnakumar 16 November 2018

The change of seasons and its beauty is depicted in this poem. Good one.

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Thank you Devi for the encouraging comments

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Prabha 13 November 2018

I could visualise the change in seasons through your poem. Nicely written

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Thank you Prabha, thank you for the comments

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