Am I? ? Poem by Susheela Alexiose

Am I? ?

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Why did I fall in love with you?
So deeply, so truly, so madly?
And poured out my heart and soul
Knowing for certain who you are

Am I still loving you
deep in my heart?
Am Idisturbed within me
'cause you don't care anymore?

Going thru' pain and agony
is not foreign to me
But you had a special place in my heart
And I loved you as I had never loved anyone

Even a single act of negligence
An inappropriate word or sentence
Made deep wound in my heart
As I loved you with all its intensity and passion

As you moved away from me
I stare at the stars at night
In the morning, I search for the rainbow
And I stand still and wait

To hold you close to me
So close, that I can hear your heartbeat
To love you once again
So I can see beauty in everything

Sunday, January 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 13 January 2019

Anyone who does not appreciate a love like this is either mad or a complete fool! Passionately and wonderfully written. Goes much further than just written words do, touching all who will read it.

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 January 2019

As you moved away from me I stare at the stars at night In the morning, I search for the rainbow And I stand still and wait..' is such a nice stanza. Can feel how deep is your love from the lines. Liked it.

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Dr. Antony Theodore 04 December 2021

VERY FINE POEM EXPRESSIVE OF DEEP LOVE

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Latha Flexture 25 January 2019

Wonderful poem

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 January 2019

Even a single act of negligence An inappropriate word or sentence Made deep wound in my heart As I loved you with all its intensity and passion seeing beauty in everything when we are in love....... beautiful expression of love and desire and romance. tony

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Jaya J 14 January 2019

Very touching. Beautifully penned.

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Anjana Nair 14 January 2019

Beautiful poem...just loved it..keep writing..god bless! !

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