‘amnesia’ [2]…. Poem by Dr. Sakti P. Chakravorty

‘amnesia’ [2]….

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‘AMNESIA’ [2]….
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Memory: -
You’re –
# grey,
# greasy,
# labile,
# lithe,
# volatile.
You’re –
# Sulky,
# Make soul –
bulky.
# So cruel –
why rob fuel?
Want to be -
oblivious of you.

Leave me-alone,
Better,
You go:
To bottom of pacific
Or,
In the center of
Black Hole.

Me, swim in void tunnel of –
Space-Ocean of Amnesia for: -
Formlessness, Fromless-ness,
Experiencing—total cipher,
no sorrow, no joy, no pain,
no euphoria, utopia,
no bondage no salvation.

O’ Memory -
Go into coma,
Deep coma.
Never ‘come-alive’ in me
I salute you: -
Au revoir!

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Waqas Naeem 09 September 2009

I like your style of writing and the expressions were interesting, but I think you got a little carried away with the flow during the middle portion.. fortunately, you recovered well..

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Carol Gall 15 August 2009

excellence in providing the reader with your thoughts 10

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B. Bautista 09 August 2009

O memory Go into coma, deep coma Never come alive in me I salute you Au Revoir There are sort of sad memories I would like to bury, dig them oneday and perceive them with no aches.... wonderful poem , , , voted 10

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Surya . 28 July 2009

high technical language has been used here.voted 10 surya

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Obinna Eruchie 27 July 2009

A wonderful piece from you.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 31 October 2009

Amresia is seen here from another angle in a short and firm manner.

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it is sad when one want desperately to remember love, and past life and can't. this seems real.

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Tai Chi Italy 23 September 2009

I am really enjoying these perspectives on Amnesia, this one made me want to challenge our minds authority to dictate our memories. I have been taught that it is within our own capabilities to direct our mind towards more positive thoughts, when those we want to escape from, seem to dominate our existence. We have to let them in and then allow them to sail through and away, clearing the path to allow our minds own strength to take us where we really want to be going. It takes practice and then becomes natural, so that, no matter what the situation you find yourself in, you can think your way through it and out of harms way, if that is the case of course. I believe we create our own futures by the thoughts we think in the now! That is why it is essential to break the chains that our minds try to bind us to misery in. I often astound myself at how easily I forget bad things in my life, but we have to, or life would be unbearable, there are many many more good things to consider. Smiling at you Tai

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Katang Chakravorty 19 September 2009

Is Memory the legal lethal luggage? Readers’ reaction please.. Let us be illegal to enjoy Amnesia. Wow! Ten+++ WR

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Aparna Sinha 16 September 2009

wow! ! BBYE memory (ha ha ha) there is this hindi word for captivating text 'dhara-pravh'(if there is English word for it I dont remember it now!) Never seen Amnesia this way! lovely poem once again...

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