An Aeroplane Drones Through The Sky Poem by Tan Pratonix

An Aeroplane Drones Through The Sky

Rating: 5.0


An aeroplane drones through the sky,
The world is afternoon;
And from the mountains mounting high
A drowsy distant boom

As swirling ash and heavy smoke
The thunder comes up from the coast,
Breaking out in cannonade
That seems to grow and then to fade;

As sweeping dust into my face,
The rattling of a chariot race,
Comes leaping fire in the trees
With jagged arms, a fantasy

Of Casbah dancers from the sea;
A virtuouso in the sky
Leaps abandon to the eye,

To thundering of distant drums
That mount upon the tiny hum
Of the speck-like aeroplane
Dissolving into misty rain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seamus O Brian 19 November 2016

Exquisite use of contrast between the image of a constant, almost boring, drone of an aircraft and the ensuing chaotic destruction that follows. Beautiful metaphoric applications: chariot races, Casbah dancers from the sea, aerial virtuoso. This is fine piece of writing, Tan. Definitely 10+.

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Philippa Lane 07 February 2006

A well-crafted poem - I loved the second to last stanza - 'Of Casbah dancers...' and I liked the title too.

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