Keeping everybody
With an utter surprise,
Very slowly they sip in.
In time they blossom out -
With an astounding beauty.
They create bulges
And those mounts so alluring to attract!
As if some beautiful frescos from front, rear
And inside the cavernous cave!
They make them appealing
And so tempting to all,
That even a saint is tilted and lost
Being struck by those illustrious curves.
They transform a mere girl child
To a curvaceous dame!
What a great sculptor it is!
All alone creating them!
ESTROGEN, a hormone by name
An amazing sculptor in deed! !
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Amitava (15.8.2014)
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my favorite lines: That even a saint is tilted and lost Being struck by those illustrious curves. ...........well, i guess saints are/were humans too. are we talking just about male saints? ? christian saints? ? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Very slowly they sip in. ...............if you use sip, i don't follow your meaning. how about slip? cavernous cave! ..............is this poem X-rated? and i wish you would illustrate the illustrious curves for me. please! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! :) i think some girls (in their 20s and 30s) are still waiting for bumps to appear, well, at least bumps that require more than a sports bra! but i've heard it said that more than a handful? is a waste. and who sculpted Michelangelo's David's model? ? no, i wasn't alive THEN. bri :) p.s. i think in deed (rather than indeed) must be the influence of British English.
Great imagery......yes a hormone called estrogen makes this beauty possible.....truly a great sculptor............ very nicely composed with a surprising ending.............. Amitavaji........
Amazing. That surprising ending tipped the whole scale. Cheers and hats off to your imagination. Smiles all over.
Wonderful poem. Really Amazing sculptor you have carved with the stupendous words. Captivating lines... That even a saint is tilted on seeing it. Marvellous.... Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing with us.
The most beautiful sculpture, no doubt, nobody will disagree, the climax of nature's art.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An amazing poem here unveils the portrait of an amazing sculptor! A unique poem that sounds romantic and captivating all throughout. Amiitavaji, you are going to assert yourself in the PH in a short time.