Musfiq us shaleheen

Gold Star - 5,207 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

An Autumnal Dream - Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

A set of dreams as autumnal cloud
Drifts again and again -
I bought all plucked flowers,
perches into a flower basket
again and again

At dark sunk night I dreamed full moon
At full moon I never dreamed dark night
I saw beauty and truth hide behind melody
Tried to rescue love and hope
again and again

Lining my eyes towards her path
Though I could not touch her
I saw petals of roses plucked and wither
A flower basket behold an empty heart

I dreamed that you would come to me,
At full moon night with some sticks of flowers
I am passionate and temp
For waiting and waiting for you
I want to behold thy forever and ever-

If you don't come again on my lonely lane
I will be wandered through autumnal cloud,
with my dream angel
As like as she represent you! !

- @Musfiq us shaleheen 31st January,2013

Topic(s) of this poem: autumn, dream, love

Form: Prose Poem


Poet's Notes about The Poem

If you don't come again on my lonely lane
I will be wandered through autumnal cloud,
with my dream angel
As like as she represent you! !

Comments about An Autumnal Dream by Musfiq us shaleheen

  • Rahman Henry (2/6/2014 10:40:00 PM)


    A Jivananada Dash, after a long time, once again! (Report) Reply

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  • Abaka Blessing Anastasia (4/2/2013 2:34:00 PM)


    lining ur eyes towards her path make the dreams come into reality. amazing rhymes. good work. (Report) Reply

  • Asif Andalib (2/10/2013 9:13:00 AM)


    Beautiful write. I like it (Report) Reply

  • (2/1/2013 3:43:00 AM)


    very romantic poem with nicely penned.. beautiful imagery. (Report) Reply

  • Kelvin Owusu (1/31/2013 11:59:00 PM)


    I saw petals of roses unplugged and wither
    A flower basket behold an empty heart

    Amazing line and poem, this is nicely penned
    (Report) Reply

  • Sallam Yassin (1/31/2013 12:41:00 PM)


    lovers are dreamers
    always
    dream for bitter future of love
    and you represent that very well
    (Report) Reply

  • Musfiq Us Shaleheen (1/31/2013 11:09:00 AM)


    sorry sir it was a slip of pen(not whiter will be wither) (Report) Reply

  • Hazel Durham (1/31/2013 7:48:00 AM)


    A very introspective poem alluring and heartwrenching, as you wait for your beloved! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 31, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, May 25, 2015


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