An Emetic Poem by Jazib Kamalvi

An Emetic

Rating: 3.9


Conjoining back to back, staying on the moustache. The blind's nasal cascades, are crystal transparent.

Those who'll hate, burn in the hell. And you should further tell. Raised from milk, raised from butter. The blind's nasal cascades, are crystal transparent.

The mouses are hanging, with tails outside. Inside they are banging, with nails outside. It seems on inhaling, that they are going back. The blind's nasal cascades, are crystal transparent.

Biscuit-like colour, dazzles every eye. Two lusty damsels, as waving lonely. The blind's nasal cascades, are crystal transparent.

What is their function, feeding and quenching. What is the assumption, eliminating grief. Honey enriched sweetmeat, is ready in brief. The blind's nasal cascades, are crystal transparent.

Never sit aimless, at threshold. Remain at home, in this part of age. They are wandering, in their own craze. The blind's nasal cascades, are crystal transparent.

Never make curd, in the inverted pots. Never churn it, with unnecessary might. Hardly restrained, with moustaches' hurdles. The blind's nasal cascades, are crystal transparent.

Saturday, January 21, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: futile,humour,irony,satire
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Presented in a very profligate gathering.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 20 January 2018

Biscuit-like colour, dazzles every eye. Two lusty damsels, as waving lonely. The blind's nasal cascades, are crystal transparent......Scintillating expression! I liked it..Thanks for sharing!

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Jazib Kamalvi 20 January 2018

Thank you very much, Dr, for your lovely poetic comments.

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Rajendra Rout 12 May 2018

I agree with you Dillip sir.it is a lovely poem

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Akhtar Jawad 20 April 2017

Enjoyed this humorous poem that was presented in a very profligate gathering. The gathering would have enjoyed a lot.

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Keshab Mansukhani 02 August 2022

Love the flow.

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Nabakishore Dash 03 July 2022

Congrats for POD.

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Congratulations, Poet Jazib Kamalvi. Today, this poem is featured as the Modern Poem of The Day on PoemHunter. Most prestigious recognition. Let this happen more often.

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A B Faniki 04 September 2019

Iintriguing***

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 September 2019

Thanks again, Dear Faniki.

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