An Employed Audacity Poem by Lady _off_track

An Employed Audacity

Rating: 4.7


Yet...
Yet there is hope to break this dread,
For courage lies in what lies ahead;
A force of will, a spirit strong,
Can quell the terror and right the wrong.

For those who'd seek to vanquish fear,
Must stand tall, must never veer;
Must take a chance and never flinch,
And boldly face the foe and winch.

For when one's audacity is employed,
The strength of man is fully enjoyed;
The courage of the heart to test,
Will bring a sense of newfound zest.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem speaks to the power of courage and facing one's fears. It states that fear can be paralyzing and overwhelming, but there is hope to break it if we can summon the courage to face what lies ahead. It encourages us to take chances and never flinch, and to stand tall and never veer away from our goals. Through audacity and strength of will, we will be able to enjoy a newfound sense of zest. Ultimately, the poem is a reminder to be brave and never back down from challenges.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 17 March 2023

winch? 'A winch is a lifting device comprising a rope or chain around a rotating drum, which turns by crank or motor. When your car gets stuck, you can use a winch attached to the front or back bumper to free the vehicle.'

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Jim McGill 17 March 2023

I like it…even with winch—which I read as wince.

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Lady _off_track 19 March 2023

Winch is the obsolete form of wince.

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Nabakishore Dash 17 March 2023

Well crafted peace of writing to inspire bravery to face the many odds of life.

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Lady _off_track 19 March 2023

Your words have made my day! It's wonderful to know that my poem has touched someone else.

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Bri Edwards 17 March 2023

re: Poet's Notes: I, Bri, think a 'wise'/prudent person WILL 'back down from challenges' which she or he judges to be 'too risky' to attempt/tempt. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 17 March 2023

audacity (3 meanings) : 'Fearless daring; intrepidity. Bold or insolent heedlessness of restraints, as of those imposed by prudence, propriety, or convention. An act or instance of intrepidity or insolent heedlessness.'

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Bri Edwards 17 March 2023

BUTTTTT, (see my previous comments) ....the the poem would be saying to 'never flinch' AND to '...winch aka flinch', which are opposite actions, right? ;)

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Bri Edwards 17 March 2023

*** wince: 'To shrink or start involuntarily, as in pain or distress; flinch.' OK! I say use 'wince' so readers understand. IF, indeed, the poet is suggesting pain. Hmm?

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Bri Edwards 17 March 2023

also: winch: 'The crank used to give motion to a grindstone or similar device. (OR) An obsolete or dialectal form of wince*** '

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