Thursday, March 16, 2023

An Employed Audacity Comments

Rating: 4.7

Yet...
Yet there is hope to break this dread,
For courage lies in what lies ahead;
A force of will, a spirit strong,
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Bri Edwards 17 March 2023

re: Poet's Notes: I, Bri, think a 'wise'/prudent person WILL 'back down from challenges' which she or he judges to be 'too risky' to attempt/tempt. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 17 March 2023

audacity (3 meanings) : 'Fearless daring; intrepidity. Bold or insolent heedlessness of restraints, as of those imposed by prudence, propriety, or convention. An act or instance of intrepidity or insolent heedlessness.'

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Bri Edwards 17 March 2023

BUTTTTT, (see my previous comments) ....the the poem would be saying to 'never flinch' AND to '...winch aka flinch', which are opposite actions, right? ;)

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Bri Edwards 17 March 2023

*** wince: 'To shrink or start involuntarily, as in pain or distress; flinch.' OK! I say use 'wince' so readers understand. IF, indeed, the poet is suggesting pain. Hmm?

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Bri Edwards 17 March 2023

also: winch: 'The crank used to give motion to a grindstone or similar device. (OR) An obsolete or dialectal form of wince*** '

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Bri Edwards 17 March 2023

winch? 'A winch is a lifting device comprising a rope or chain around a rotating drum, which turns by crank or motor. When your car gets stuck, you can use a winch attached to the front or back bumper to free the vehicle.'

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Jim McGill 17 March 2023

I like it…even with winch—which I read as wince.

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Lady _off_track 19 March 2023

Winch is the obsolete form of wince.

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Good poem exuding positive energy. Invoking the right thinking..

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Lady _off_track 19 March 2023

Thank you for taking the time to read my work and share your thoughts with me. It means a lot to know that my words are being appreciated.

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Nabakishore Dash 17 March 2023

Well crafted peace of writing to inspire bravery to face the many odds of life.

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Lady _off_track 19 March 2023

Your words have made my day! It's wonderful to know that my poem has touched someone else.

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