An Empty Sky Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
An Empty Sky
Looking vacantly at the empty sky.
Asking hundreds of questions and why
Not cursing fate and feeling shy
Yet so much eagerness and helplessness to try
Sky has nothing much to offer
Many hollow ideas and to differ
Vast empty horizon as over stretched empire
Only blue color to be taken into account and admire
It is like entire life spread over number of years
Sometimes shadowed by pain and fears
Sometimes moon’s cool light to enjoy
Morning cool breeze to stay for little joy
You will have to feel it up with colors
Some to be colorless like white color
Pain and sacrifice with orange
And dry green leaves for age
Over all it depends how you steer the course
Either you make it worthwhile or filled with remorse
Try to come out of it successfully
And make it look so nice and beautifully
So look at it differently and give the shape
Never feel dejected and fall in the trap
Life is what you make out of it
Turn it with the wind and feel comfortably and fit
I love this poem! It is well writen and I enjoyed reading it.
2 hours ago « Delete » kirti shah Turn it with the wind and feel comfortably and fit Send message | satyam 73864.. nice Send message | surekha beautiful Send message | Megha very nice. Send message | sky high its how we lead our life that puts color to it.... thanks hasmukh..
A nice poem beautifully composed. I like most the last two stanzas. Regarding second stanza I agree with 'Unwritten Soul'. An empty sky is not empty, it has much much to give like clarity, transparancy, space for clouds, letting rays of sun moon reach the earth, rainbow etc. Poetry is very nice.
very well explained. loved each line of it! 'So look at it differently and give the shape' my english teacher would have lined this as the topic line! ! keep up the good work.10 stars: D
Beautiful write :) for this comment i took few lines(a stanza) to share my opinion: 'Sky has nothing much to offer' -I feel it offer many, it's inspired me to be free...dont you? 'Many hollow ideas and to differ' -Hollow not mean lack, it provides a space for cloud to rain and rain as a bless...hollow is not empty, but air to breathe 'Vast empty horizon as over stretched empire' -It's how the sky be a universal country..no boundary all embraced as one sea 'Only blue color to be taken into account and admire' -Not only blue, it changed to different colors in different time and tell me it's like human different time different mood sometimes An empty sky is not empty, adored by me and full with something nicely I do like this poem though! _Unwritten Soul
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Today 13.09 nice discriptive piece - i often watch the sky making faces in the clouds looking for where awnsers lye amongst the blue of day or twinkling stars. on An empty sky From Scott Ball Today 13.09