My love, you are not with me anymore,
You left me in your disdain,
Knowing you were my all,
And that this could’ve ended my life.
Hate grew on me,
As love disappeared,
And love grew on me,
As hate disappeared.
This was all a confusion,
I didn’t know what to do,
Love and hate grew,
As the distance you drew.
Thoughts came and went by,
Till one day I realized,
All I had to do was to learn,
How to say an endless thankyou,
For all you did for me.
My love, my darling,
You taught me how to love,
And what it meant,
I know I did too.
Your love was an endless adventure,
A third world war I between my soul,
But you taught me how to fight,
And so I did fight.
My love, my all,
You taught me to believe in myself,
And so I never did before,
But for you now I do.
You taught me, my love,
Whenever I was childish,
You called my attention,
And so you taught me to grow up.
You taught me, my love,
What life was about,
To thank God for all I had,
And learn from those experiences that were so bad.
You taught me everything you could,
And you left the most important lesson for the end,
My love, you taught me what pain was like,
And for that Is what I am right now.
January 10,2009
Very hard lines...but a love is forever in your mind..keep writing so nice. I like to read you.
You taught me everything you could, And you left the most important lesson for the end, My love, you taught me what pain was like, And for that Is what I am right now.......emotionally hurt poetess dwells at lengththe treachery.. but still no remorse aand ends with'thank you'... beautiful write and desrve...10 read mine thank you, miss i miss you and how r u/
what a devastating show of emotions right from the heart. Now you learned how to be in love and in despair at the same time. A nice one, keep it up...
very deep and so touching.This is a nice and great show of your emotions.
As with other works of yours, your depth of understanding seems beyond your years. Clear and concise, with laser-like precision.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very emoitonal write with your heart on your shirtsleve... Very touching and filled wiht much emoiton..... Bonnie