***an Eternal Moment! Poem by RAJ NANDY

***an Eternal Moment!

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AN ETERNAL MOMENT!
The joy of that moment my love, -
when our breaths melt to blend!
And the steam quivering on the mouth of
the volcano explodes, -
With the molten lava gushing out from
cavern’s dark depths;
Drowning us and sweeping us in its
flowing tide!
Then the womb of darkness explodes, –
Into a new life and a new song once again!

-Raj Nandy
14 Dec 09
New Delhi

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 19 March 2010

Each moment can be an eternity, for we have no assurance we will ever have another one. A vivid write. I like the drama of this one very much. Always your friend. Sandra

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Ritty Patnaik 18 December 2009

dear raj.....a eternal moment is always remembered with rejuvenation and joy.this is a sensitive poem and not many can express such feelings at ease.good write.best wishes. ritty

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Eyan Desir 18 December 2009

This is a sweet poetic write.....

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 18 December 2009

how physical how emotional how eternal that moment is the moment of love that moment could also be just physical...or just emotional...and that too could win laurels...a child LOVE MAKES IT ETERNAL

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