An Impossible Wish Poem by Namita Rani Panda

An Impossible Wish

Rating: 5.0


A silent and still statue I'm standing in the rain and the sun,
my stony eyes with frozen tear stare at the pale horizon,
my visage is disfigured and body is battered
but heart is still warm and extremely sentient,
your wind of anger and downpour of hatred break me piece by piece
still I eagerly wait for your tender fingers' kiss.
Why don't you be my final sculptor
and shape me with sweeping strokes with a riffler?
Why don't you hammer me hard with a chisel and a knife
and size me as you wish and infuse in my life,
and before I am reduced to worthless bits
with each stroke remove my flawed chips
and transform me to your priceless masterpiece?

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Love poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deluke Muwanigwa 03 March 2021

That is poetry ma'am. Metaphors aplenty. You have shown it, not said it. Beautiful stuff

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